Turntable Jack

Awesome feedback everyone. I love hearing opinions and some have been very helpful. I love to write, but I write stories and novels, not poems. So I want to get ...

Bravo. :D Now that was a great poem that flowed extremely well and I really enjoyed it. I truly liked that a lot. I don't really have any things for ...

There was a poetry contest at another forum and I didn't have much time to write or edit, and I made this poem in about 20 minutes. However, i think ...

I like this better than your other poem to be honest. It makes much more sense and is better written. The first line is great and is a wonderful line ...

First off, let me say that I can tell you are creative and a good writer from reading that. However, I don't think that poem worked for you and came ...

I know I shouldn't be thinking of the title yet. But I keep on thinking what it should be. I was thinking something like "A Boy Named Jack." However, if ...

Your message is great, and their is no denying that. Good job on writing a meaningful message. As for your poem, it is good for what it is. It is ...

The image is a tad bit big, but this a great feature and well implemented.

yea, thanks. I plan on revising this novel sentence by sentence, and I think I can pull the end off. I have some ideas, but that is something I can't ...

thanks for the self-esteem boost. Yea, a girl at the begging of the book gives him a note he forgets to read until late in the book. That states his ...

Well, I after posting some parts of my novel I am working on, I have decided I don't want anyone reading it until it is ready to be revised. So ...

This is my first time submitting something, so do not get too mad if I did something wrong. A little mad is alright. :) Overcast The sun shines cheerfully above ...

I like it and it flows quite nice. I like the shortness and it is creative. However, the line Inspiration is gone. seems a bit too long syllable rise and ...

Well, you ordered your pictures from best to worst in my opinion. The first one is extremely good, and I really like how you did the reflection. I personally like ...

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